Some of the feedback received was:
- Hierarchy problems
- Alignment problems
- People enjoyed our visual style
- Issues with contrast in some images
- One person mentioned that the table top was a little repetitive.
- Some mentioned that they didn't understand the reasoning for the dinner plate being there.
- Some issues with the clarity of the copy.
- Still no Desired Action image
Our plan to address these issues
- Use tone and font to improve hierarchy
- Apply a more rigorous grid
- Play more with the images in Photoshop
- Try and take a picture for desired action that is away from the table top.
- Add in a sentence to ensure people get the dinner plate reference
- Edit the copy and make it more concise
- Ideate some ideas for Desired Action page
This feedback has really helped us to further our project and perfect it to a great standard
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