I gained some valuable feedback from my group this week and seeing their projects going ahead gave some more perspective on the concept of wellbeing.
Industrial Design:
- He showed us his stop motion movie of the making of a pancake.
- They are going to try and show the 'magic' of food with clever editing
- Showing the movement for the cook is important
- For his next project, he is going to think about the food truck display and how it can be innovated for the optimum experience, taking influence from things like teppanyaki restaurants
VCD:
My Feedback
- Use depth of field and scale, along with an extra sentence, to make the dinner plate image clearer for the viewer
- Use the same dinner plate image for the Desired Action page but switch the focus to show the desired change
- More ideas for desired action page: pets, cat sitting on a laptop, food more appealing.
Nick
- Anxiety
- Name "false alarm"
- Creating a narrative throughout the pages - a person with anxiety realises that their anxiety is a 'false alarm'
- Concept is very graphic, he didn't have so much of a concept for us to critique, but he has heaps of good ideas to carry on with
Jessica
- First few pages have major impact with a striking first statistic
- Her brief was pretty much fully resolved in the front, but towards the back it still needed some work.
- She was also struggling with the desired action page, and how to show that change and resolution of the problem, we suggested to her that she take the issue page and show the resolution to that page in the desired action page
Fashion Design
- Fashion Design is always awesome to see
- She showed us her mood board and her initial sketches.
- She is focussing on the ocean and pollution in the ocean, creating a range of outfits around that theme.
- For her second project she is planning on making a ocean piece and a protest piece that represents the pollution
- She's currently wondering how to show the pollution within her outfit making capabilities
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