I really enjoyed the photography lecture, I have always shied away from photography because I haven't had much experience with it. This lecture inspired me to try when I can.
Feedback on our 8 pages:
This was helpful, the people that gave us feedback said that they really liked our brief, but they also gave some great critique on how we can make it clearer for someone who is receiving the brief.
important points of feedback
- Desired action - think about moods (laughter and positivity) as a way into solving the brief (gently suggesting the solution not solving) also will help with synthesising this
- Barriers - think about peer pressure from people around (bosses, families, employees...)
- Issue - can also involve moods, needs to be synthesised more to be a lot clearer in direction (2 sentences max.)
- Audience - Need to identify a group, and include the audience profiles as examples.
Wordlists:
Creating the wordlists helped identify some possible rhetorics that we can use in our design
I'm going to explore the idea of stacking up and building up of work
and Georgia will look at making a sterile document
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